October 2017
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poem -- "thirst of earth, carelessness of stars"


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thirst of earth, carelessness of stars

send me a sign
scatter some darkness just for me,
blanket the sky and let me be enfolded
bring thunder, bring lightning,
bring the rain

dust wafts in my throat
my lips stick to my teeth,
my tongue to the roof of my mouth
fizz-pop! open, the slightest moisture teases my skin
lemons and limes scent the air,
beaded droplets coat tall clear glasses.
I watch, feel as others gulp and sigh, satisfied.
I swallow sand
and choke bitterly.

I tilt my head back, stare accusingly at the empty sky --
a sky selfishly devoid of presents or even promises.
The stars sparkle laughingly at me,
flaunting their nakedness.
Not for me will they don cloud-robes and lightning-jewelry.

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Comments
dio_aiutami ══╣╠══
belenen ══╣blossoming╠══
ooohh, thank you so much! That means a lot because this is the first bit of poetry I've written in... at least 4 years, if not 5. *hugs* thanks!
bornbeautiful ══╣╠══
i love your writing. :) have you ever tried to get it published in a poetry magazine?
belenen ══╣bluestocking╠══
a long long time ago, I have -- this is my first poem in 4 or 5 years! I'm glad my muse hasn't given up on me. ;-)
deleon ══╣╠══
Wow, your use of onemonopeias (sp?) and personification is wonderful!
belenen ══╣blossoming╠══
thanks so much! ♥
free2be ══╣╠══
It makes me thirsty.
belenen ══╣bluestocking╠══
awesome, thanks for letting me know! that's what I was going for (and it makes me thirsty too). ♥
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Expect to find curse words, nudity, (occasionally explicit) talk of sex, and angry ranting, but NEVER slurs or sexually violent language. I use TW when I am aware of the need and on request.