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poem: "One Flow"




One Flow


reach into me
swirling in delighted bubbles through my belly
unfurling in delicate fronds down my spine

your colors bleed into me
together we spark in rainbow
I'm blinded
and seeing for the first time

only you could slither through me
like a serpent through water
flutter through me
like a leaf tripping, skipping
on the breeze

your mouth on mine
your fingers linked to mine
your breath mixing with mine
your body swaying into mine

you and me
mine and yours and mine
you are mine

I am yours

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Comments
flyingshaman ══╣╠══
oh. my. goddess. this is.. sacred and divine.. and -beautiful-. the first time I read this, heat flushed and sparked through my body, and I got this electricity going through my body. Then I started crying. I really -felt- this.

wow. Wow. I want to have hushed silence around this almost.. GODS

I .. wow. I'm at a loss for words ..
belenen ══╣oneness╠══
mmmmm, I'm so thrilled and delighted that this touched you so... I felt it, too ♥

I love you love you love you ♥
optimistic7 ══╣╠══
Please excuse my intrusion but this is beautiful. What love and joy and happiness and beauty you share. I feel it radiating from the page. WOW
belenen ══╣beautiful╠══
no intrusion, thank you so much for this comment! ♥ Positive comments on my poetry are very, very welcome.
setherlee ══╣╠══
i think this is the first time i'm commenting on your entry but this poem is very touching.
belenen ══╣beautiful╠══
oh, thank you so much! ♥
de_paddestoel ══╣╠══
I blink away tears. This poem resonates more deeply on every reading.

*sighs and reads again*
belenen ══╣artless╠══
oh, thank you SO much! ♥
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