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haiku


answers are specious:
it's questions all the way down.
I'll just keep swimming.

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roina_arwen ══╣Mermaid Swim Silhouette╠══
You certain did away with all those extraneous details! Ballsy entry, simple and lovely. :)
dmousey ══╣╠══
I feel as if I just went toba mast e r class on Poetry! Thank you for showing me how Chekhov's style could inspire. Brilliant
dmousey ══╣╠══
Sorry computer having problems. That shoulder read to a master class. [Laughing]
eternal_ot ══╣╠══
Ah! short and apt!
beeker121 ══╣╠══
This is a lovely haiku. And of course I'm left thinking turtles...
halfshellvenus ══╣╠══
I'm not only thinking turtles, I'm thinking of a prompt I hope doesn't return again later. :)

It has all of the succession of that idea, though, in very spare detail.
eska818 ══╣╠══
All I can think of is Dory, from Finding Nemo. Just keep swimming, just keep swimming

I was really tempted to do a super short entry myself, but I didn't have the courage. XD
kehlen_crow ══╣books1 - glasses╠══
This is very good. Made me think.
rayaso ══╣╠══
It may be questions all the way down, but in the end, the answer is still just turtles. Good job.
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